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Page 127 - The Mark, Part 2
SpaceMouse
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Posted: 20 Mar 2016 07:41
DUN DUN DUNNNNN
Casanova
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Posted: 21 Mar 2016 15:52
"This symbol is something Miss Gearheart, nor anyone here, could have seen before. And this is another truth that this is a matter for the Religious Caste."
To me, it sounds like "Neither" is missing from the script. Also, "And" is not a good way to start a sentence. Maybe "This is another truth that shows this is..." would work better, but I dunno.
SpaceMouse
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Posted: 21 Mar 2016 19:27
Thanks to the
dark magic
of how I have everything coded up, those sentences are very easily rewritten to be clearer.
And no one will ever know...
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